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It's ok

You did a very good job on combat fluidity and with hit sounds. My suggestion would be: make it a longer sequence of blows before people gets thrown away. It will make it look much more complex and impressive.
Other suggestion that you probably know it make it longer.. I pretty sure with those two changes you could get a really good score :)

It's funny!

It has a humor type that appeals me! The fact that the genre is drama makes this even more fun! As it started with that suspense of him eating the chips I was expecting them to start the typical talk... not such an abrupt,violent and unexpected interaction! I bursted laughing! Good job!

Incredible!

Impressive!!! Your story is very simple and yet very entertaining and that's the primary goal of any serie/story! I've seen people have better graphics and design than you, but I give you the same credit as I gave to them, because even tought your drawing style is simple you choose it and you keep it till the end while doing it PERFECTLY! Your graphics are flawless in their own style.
Congratulations it was really well done, without tlaking i really got angry with the flies :)

I gave you a 4 for the great graphics and gameplay physics wise. However I believe such a great concept of the getting younger and stronger concept should be better explored.

- You can never do anything against your enemies
- The game forces yo uto follow a path and get the buffs at an appropriate time
- You don't truly feel the advantage of getting younger as everything gets instantly proportionally harder
- You should be able to choose what stats to buff when you grab items that make you younger and should not be fully dependent on them.

Quite an interesting game! The concept is funny and challenging, the graphics and physics are good, the levels are cleverly designed, overall a great job! I would just suggest you:

- Remove the bored animations from the beginning, it's confusing.
- Make the level restart automatically as soon as the head is out of the screen.
- Make the Restart level button more visible.
- If I go to level select after a level, change/remove the music automatically

Great game and Good luck! :)

I give you one star because at least it's a flash game, no matter how bad it is. If you add more purpose to it, a menu, some sound, better mechanics an create some additional challenges instead of this weird one-screen nyan cat spam you might get accepted!

Amazing!

Honestly. I have no idea how to produce fractal images, but still, based on the fractals I've seen on my life and since they are based on a mathematical formula I would say this one has to be the most amazing one I've ever seen!! It's so balanced, so perfectly ornamented, it looks like it's one of those draws in the roof or in the floor of the old royal rooms.
By looking at the borders it seems like a tailored ornament and that's quite impressive coming from fractal art! Pleasant job!

A suggestion

Yes, I'm browsing throught your gallery.. :P and I'm really liking what I'm seeing! The fractal is amazing, I just think It looks a bit too pale and lifeless, Try giving it a more blue-ish color and I think It would look even more amazing!

wow

That kind of stuff just amazes me! I don't know if it's the beautiful complexity of the draws, but still, I stand unable to critique it any way... I'll probably gonna come back to get it as a wallpaper !